我上初中,水平也不怎么地,不过不会有语法错误的.不过120个词有点多额……所以你就凑合着看吧.
原文：
My favourite season is winter.Because I can see snow in winter.It is white and beautiful.When it snows,I always play with my friends.Sometimes we make a snowman in front of my house.Then we run around the snowman and sing songs about snow.How happy we are!And how nice the snow is!This winter I saw the snow again.All the house became white.All the trees became white,too,How beautiful the world is!
I like snow very much.So I hope I can see snow every winter.Which season do you like best?Is it winter?Do you like snow,either?
译文：
我最喜欢的季节是冬天.因为我能够在冬天看到雪.它是白色的并且很美.当下雪的时候,我总是和我的朋友一起玩.有时候我们在我家前堆雪人.然后我们绕着雪人跑并且唱着关于雪的歌.我们多么开心啊!那雪多么漂亮啊!这个冬天我又看见雪了.所有的房子都变成了白色.所有的树也都变白了.整个世界多么美丽!
我非常喜欢雪.所以我希望每个冬天都能看见雪.你最喜欢哪个季节呢?是冬天吗?你也喜欢雪吗?
我一字一句打的啊,LZ记得选我啊.