Question

英语改错i'm very glad that you come to my home.for the moment,ev

Answer 1

I'm very glad that you came(原：come) to my home.For the moment,everything is well prepred(原：prepring) here and my parents and I are looking forward to the day you come(原：when you will come).Please call me(原：Do telephone me) after you get your ticket so I will know your arriving time,(原：make yout trip and tell me what train you're to take,)I'll meet you at the station.As you know,Shanghai is a large city and there are many places worth visiting(原：visit),but I think one week is enough.In the first three days I'd like to show(原：bring) you around the city.We'll go(原：come) to shopping malls(原：business zones) such as Nanjing Road.I'll take you to some famous parks as well.For the rest of your stay(原：During the left of the time),we will visit some beautiful small villages(原：village) around Shanghai.