原文有小小语法问题下面为你改正了.
I believe that in terms of taking pictures it is not important where and when the photo is taken.It is important with whom I am in the picture or what memories it leaves me.It is what makes an ordinary photo special and unique.
1.用 travelling 改写
I believe that in travelling it is not important when and how I travel.Rather,it is important with whom I travel and the experience we share together.It is what makes the travel special and memorable.
2.用 cooking 改写
I believe that in terms of cooking a meal it is not important what and how many dishes I prepare.Rather,it is important with whom I will enjoy these dishes or what we talk about during the meal.It is what makes an ordinary cooking event event special and unique.
3.用 meal 改写
I believe that in terms of a meal it is not important where and when the meal is eaten.Rather it is important with whom I partake the meal or whether a good time is had.It is what it makes an ordinary meal a special and unique experience.
我是加拿大人,前英语老师.