求牛人修改雅思作文    Some people argue that air transport can bring

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  • At the present age,airplanes play a crucial role not only in our daily life but also in goods transporting.Every coin has two sides.【While it becomes】 a necessary vehicle gradually ,【meanwhile删除】 it also 【leads】 to 【the删除】 increasing transporting 【fees】.

    There are reasons for some people 【to】believe that air transport 【provides】 us more options.First of all,it 【promotes】 the development of international trade.Specifically,air parcel 【decreases】 the distance between【加the】 producting area and 【加the】【selling】 area.There is 【an删除】 ample evidence 【suggesting】 that it is common that Chinese supermarkets present fresh fruits which 【come】 from America and 【加that】factories use American advanced machines.【These】【benefit】 from air transport.Moreover,transporting by air 【boosts】 efficiency.As we konw,today is a fast-paced century which requires speed,air transporting 【reduces】 the time on the road.Lastly,taking airplanes is 【safer】 than 【any other transporting way】.By that I mean as for its speciality,it always 【affords】 people a convinient service with great security.

    Even so,I admit that it may be true 【that 】the expenditure of transporting makes industrial and agricultural products cost more,which means 【decreasing】 the profits of 【production】.And then ,an apparent problem with this vehicle is the limited weight and quantities.Accordingly,as for a large amount of goods,it 【may cost】 much more money in transporting production.

    In 【a删除】 conclusion,the diversity of transportation is critical,【and】we should make a reasonable option in terms of the 【productions】.