1.人名写的不规范.
2.starving African people前不需用定冠词
3.再就是语序(非要鸡蛋里挑骨头的话):为了便于理解,将as a gesture of solidarity提前或置后.
语法上没太大问题.
A hunger strike was made by Ban Ki-Moon with starving African people as a gesture of solidarity .
1.人名写的不规范.
2.starving African people前不需用定冠词
3.再就是语序(非要鸡蛋里挑骨头的话):为了便于理解,将as a gesture of solidarity提前或置后.
语法上没太大问题.
A hunger strike was made by Ban Ki-Moon with starving African people as a gesture of solidarity .