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Last Sunday afternoon,Zhang Hua and his
classmates were playing in the park.Suddenly,they heard someone shouting for
help.They ran to the lake and saw a little boy in the lake.The boy’s mother
couldn’t swim,so Zhang Hua jumped into the lake and carried the boy to the
bank.He saved the boy’s life.The boy’s mother was very grateful.
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