I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little（LESS） aggressive. From the time I was about four until(TO) I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy(TOYS). I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did(WENT) wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which(WHAT) was happening. When I tear(TORE) apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, "That's it. No more toys to(FOR) you." My punishment lasted (FOR)a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must (COULD)make my toys to(去掉to) last My attitude changed from then on
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