200分英语演讲稿求改Good evening,ladies and gentlemen.It’s my honor t

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  • Good evening,ladies and gentlemen.(不要It’s my honor to meet you all and share my speech.)I am so lucky to have chance to speak here.I’m james,a student from Class 14,Grade 10.Today,i want to talk about "choice"” 不能用动词,要不就“how to choose ……”

    To be,or not to be,that is a question.”、which from sharkspear 's hemlt.这句话是莎士比亚作品里的 hamlt只是一个故事主人公.The story of choice,in the two kinds of world,alive or dead.when there is choice,we always make a decision quickly without thinking.later,we regret it.You probably would say to someone that I will never regret of my decision.It’s none of your business.Simmer down.Pay attention to what I will say and you might say it again.Any decision we make would change our life.For example,me.I took part in the informatics Olympic Games last month.It’s nearly that I made every effort to win the first prize so that I can go to college without taking the university entrance examination.How attractive!However,when the hard work and interesting games come towards me,I play games instead of studying And then,( every day we have a quiz,to cheat to get a high mark or to do it by myself but get a low mark,I choose the high mark for the reason that it is able to feed my vanity.完全看不懂你的英文想表达的东西,更不用说听众能明白) After a quiz,everyone was tired and tried to get home soon.I always choose going home instead of staying there to review the importance and difficulties of the quiz.Finally,when we were having the last competition,another choice appeared,to answer the awful question or to examine the other answers.I dubious about choosing.The result of that,l lost a lot of time.I chose latter at last.Could you guess did I win it or not?The first prize line is 49,however,I only got 48.5!What a pity!Just point five!I missed an excellent opportunity in my life!now I could say nothing,and nothing can be achieved.As the saying goes,every little helps a mickle.Although those are only extremely little choices in our life,I choose all of them by mistake so l had to suffer more now.May I suppose that you have found your treasure in my story?At least,my failure may tell the different choice cause different result,even our destiny.Whenever you are making a decision,please think harder about your future and your life.I hope that,one day,we can say the way I chose,no matter what happens,I will go along it forever and never repent it.In the end,I would like to say” the destiny is not an opportunity,it’s choice”!Thank you for listening.

    你有很多词都是writing 平常大家说话时不会这样说的,英文演讲不需要长句子,不需要华丽的词语,这是英文文化的差异.讲的东西要简单 点到重点就完了.还有你的条理和层次不是那么清晰.还有很多句子基本是chi-eng 我大概改了一下.