请帮忙改文章What is the best behavior in our life?The help and hop

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  • What is the best behavior in our life?The help and hope.Let me tell you a real thing that happened with my own experience.I still remembered that I was on a summer vacation when I got on a long distance bus (limousine) to go back home,Tianjing,after an overnight train from Xi’an to Beijing.Suddenly,a young couple started a serious quarrel when the bus moved halfway.The girl used all her strength to struggle with the boy.In that time,some passengers nearby that couple began to scream.Those people looked so horrored as the young boy stuck into that girl’s chest with a dagger,leaped off the bus ,run away after pulling out the dagger.This is very terrible,full of blood everywhere.The girl was still bleeding and sitting there to wait somebody’s help.Gradually,the most of the passengers cooled down.they started to help that girl to stop the flow of blood from a wound before the policemen arrived to deal with the instant.During that time,all the people give their hand to help the wounded in different ways.

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