Question

he has became a doctor,which he want to be.这句话错了吗?错哪里?

Answer 1

he has become the doctor which he wanted to be .

1,has 后不能接过去式 要不就是has become 或 had became ,综合后句是has become .

2,which 引导从句不加逗号.

3,过去想成为医生 所以用wanted