Hello!Everyone!I am Chen Kaiyan ,you can also call me Melody as well.I am a girl of 13 years old ,who was born on April 24th,1996.I am educated in junior 2 of Jiangmen No.2 Middle School.I am fond of listening to music as well as playing computer games.Although it is bad to eat too much chocalate,I like doing so.My favourite subject is English.Super Junior from Korea is the band which I am crazy for .Since I like Korean culture very much,I am looking forward to visiting Korea some day.
谁能把这篇英语作文改得有深度些?