我觉得,例如
下周我们将去XXX野餐,我的心情XXX,因为我生活在城市里,生活很忙,所以我想放松一下.我打算和我的父母去那儿,我们将买面包,水,水果,和其他.我们打算在那放风筝,爬山,等我们累了就野餐,我相信那是一次有趣的野餐
Next sunday,wo will go to a beautiful place to have a picnic .I am very happy .Because Ilive in city and i am so busy ,so i hope i can be relaxing.i am going to there with my parents .we wil buy some bread ,water fruit and so on.We are going to fly a kite at that,mountain climbing.When we are tired,we'll have a picnic.I believe it was a fun picnic
我觉得就这样就行了,你觉得呢?