I am a new member,a clerk in Shanghai Foreign Trade Company.I like studying English,but my English is very poor.I don't know what to do,so I am very worried.I am very happy to know this web site and I like it very much.This is the first article I write here.----My Family
There are five people in my family,my father,my mother,my sister,my brother and I.My father is a rather severe man,He ia an accountant,and he usually works from 9 o' clock in the morning to 6 o' clock in the evening.My mother is a great and kind woman.She works at the restaurant in the centre of town in daytime,and does housework in the evening.My younger sister is a lovely senior middle school student.She wants to be a teacher in the future.My younger brother is a middle school student,but he is even taller than me.He likes playing computer games in his free time.He lives in Fuzhou.I'm a part time student of Shanghai TV University,a clerk in Shanghai Foreign Trade Company.I have a happy family.We all love it.
I think the English sentences have many mistakes.Please correct it.Thank you for your help.
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