My hometown is LiLing.It is in the southwest of Hunan.It’s a beautiful town ,and the people are very friendly and funny.
In LiLing ,the weather is always warm,therefore,it is a good place to go hiking .People in LiLing would like to go to the Xishan Park .There is a general’s museumn of ZuoQuan who is very famous .In spring,kids like to fly the kites ,so you can see a lot of kites flying in the sky.The food,which is named LiLing duck,is very delicious .(LiLing also productions china more than 2000 years of history.The color of china is wonderful.)这句话你大概想表达什么意思?
I love my hometown very much.What about you?Welcome to LILing.If you go here ,you will have a good time.May you be happy.
其余的大概就这么给你改吧,你是初中的吧?