非常感谢贵校接受了我的申请.
Thank you very much for the acceptance of my application.
我极想来贵校进修我的专业.
It is the height of my ambition to further my studies in this field in your university.
我希望能同意我去贵校学习.
I hope that you will allow me to come and study with you.
目前他是贵校建筑系二年级研究生.
He is now a second year graduate student in the Department of Architecture of your University.
我希望能入贵校选读应用语言学及比较文学.
I should like to enter your university to take such courses as Applied Linguistics and Comparative Literature.
我想来贵校进修,并盼能给予助学金.
I am writing to you to apply for a fellowship with a stipend in your university.
得知已被贵校职业教育系录取,非常高兴.
I am pleased to know of my admission to Department of Business Education at your University.
我真诚地希望能成为贵校的一名研究生.
To be a graduate student of yours is my sincere hope.
谢谢您6月16日来信通知我已被贵校录取.
Thank you for your letter of June16regarding my acceptance to your University.
我叫潘虹,我想来贵校进修并盼能给予奖学金.
My name is Pan Hong.I am writing to you to apply for a scholarship in your university.
看完这些例子后,其实这只是中文翻译的时候的一种变化而已,英语中不存在!就用一楼说的就对了!