我认为分三部分写：
1.初三同学普遍存在的压力是什么；
2.我的压力是什么；
3.我是如何成功缓解我的压力的.
Pressure is a serious problem in today's world.Students in Junior Three are under too much pressure.Some students can't get on well with their classmates,while others may worry about their exams.
I'm always under pressure,too.My parents want me to be the top student in class.So they send me to all kinds of training classes at weekends.
Last Monday evening,I had a talk with my mother.I told her I was not lazy.I really felt tired.I needed time to relax.My mother agreed with me at last.So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem.