my favorite animal is bunnies.Once,when I was walking home from school,I saw a man selling bunnies beside the road.I was very curious,so I steped towards the man.I asked the man if I could be permited to touch and cudle the bunnies,he agreed.I chose a pretty yellow and white striped bunny.I opened the cage door,carefully got hand of the bunny and lifted him out of the cage.He strugled a bit,I comforted him and held him tight,he grew still in my arms,after a while,he went to sleep.I did not want to break his sweet dreams,so I put him back in the cage near a big piece of cabbage.On the way home,I thought maybe I should buy him,really!I raced back to the man with the bunnies,I ask him the price.He said,all of them are 10% off,so the bunny I want costs 80 yuan.I was deperate to buy him,so I told the man that to save the bunny I want ,I will be buying him someday.Iam thinking now to save my pocket money,and bring my bunny home.
我5年级,这样的作文可以算A+,只要你不抄错,注意一些细节问题,没问题.