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短文改错 高一 多多帮忙Dear Li Xiao jun, I'm glad to receive your lette

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Dear Li Xiao jun,I'm glad to receive your letter.I'd like to disscuss the problem ----对 with you.It is true that some video games is good for your ----is改为are thinking ability and they can sometimes make you felt relased ----felt改为feel Therefore,you are spending too much time on that.----Therefore改为However You are not little boy any more.You should learn to control yourself.----not little 改为not a little Why not to try to finish your homework first every day ----not to try 改为not try and then spend a little time play some video games.I think,----play 改为playing like a student,the most important thing is to study hard at school.----like改为as You should try your best to get good grade in your ----get good grade 改为get a good grade subjects and try to become a useful person for the future.---- the future改为future