麻烦英语好朋友 帮我看看我的文章 改改错 这是一封求职信

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  • I know(have heard) that your university have(has) a(an) open position in English teacher from my friend Mr.Zhang.I would be interested in exploring the possibility of ovtaining such a position within your University.I have been(got) a doctor degree of California University of Languages.My major is(was) arts.Especially,I'm good at English,and,I'm interested in teaching english.I want(wanted) to be a(an) english teacher as(since) i was a child.I can teach something in english about oral,reading,writting(writing),(and) arts.

    I look forward to meeting you soon in an interview.Please contect(contact) with me at 1234567 .(I have taken are contained in the enclosed resume.)

    最后一句话没看懂,如果是附件是我的简历,建议说成:

    Please kindly read my resume enclosed.

    以上括号里改的都是很基本的拼写及语法时态错误.

    说实话,如果是很正式的求职信,尤其你求职的职位还是大学里的英语老师.信里的英文表述能力让我忍不住为楼主担心啊……