你的演讲有很多语法错误和很不顺的句子……
TOPIC: It's truly up to you.
"Consider you." 很奇怪的句子.好比话语你说“想你自己”.
"In all time before now and in all time to come. There is always no one to be like you." 这两个句子因该用逗号链接,不然很不通顺,而且语法有毛病.因该差不多这样：In all time before and in all time to come, there has never been anyone like you. 或者,In all time before and in all time to come, you are unique and nobody will be the same as you.
"You are unique in the entire history and future of the universe. Wow. Stop and think about that!" 句子里的stop有点多余.
“You are better than one in a million or a billion……” 我根本不知道你在说什么嘞…… 如果我按字面理解,意思就是：你比一百万之一、一亿之一还强.
“You are the only one like you in the sea of the infinity.” 你是唯一的自己?!
You are amazing, You are awesome. And by the way, you are it.
你在说什么啊…… “you are it"：你是它!?!?
As amazing and awesome as you already are, You can be even more so. Beautiful young people are the whimsy of nature. But beautiful young old people are the true works of the art.
"beautiful young old people"所以到底是年轻的还是年老的!?
But you won’t become “beautiful” just by virtue of the aging process. God gives every bird its food, but he doesn’t throw it into its nest. Whatever you want to do, wherever you want to go. It is truly up to you!
我建议你还是先重写你的演讲稿吧…… 这样的演讲稿很没有水平滴……对不住啦…… 本人在美国读书,建议你还是把基础打好吧……
不过既然你要问题,那我就问你几个吧：
1. What do you think you have in yourself that makes YOU amazing and awesome? Site some examples from your daily life that we can relate to.
2. You mentioned in your speech that "God gives every bird its food, but he doesnt throw it into its nest". In other words, you're saying that nobody gets spoon fed. But do you think everybody in life can have absolute equality?
3. What makes one "better than one in a million or a billion" just because he or she is simply unique?
4. Will one lose his or her beauty with the passing of time as one ages (from childhood entering adulthood etc.)?
5. You mentioned that every and anyone has the potential to become even more "beautiful than they already are". What makes you think so?
6. How do you think one can strive for perfection (in life)?