求大神给我写英语改错 It was hot last Sunday .My father to

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  • It was hot last Sunday.My father took me to go swimming in a swimming pool in a university.As I wasw only a beginner,I swam in the shallow water.However,after a while ,out of curiosity i wanted to try in the deeper water.Then my bad luck came!When i swam there,I was nervous that the swimming ring suddenly slipped out of my hand.I began to sink,drinking a lot of water.It was my father who swam as quickly as he could towards me and dragged me out of water.What a dangerous experience!It warns me that i should always put safety first and never take any unnecessary risks.