Congratulation!You are in University now.It's a step to your new life.In your new life you may live on your own,without your family and friends.You may feel lonely and lose,and head on facing new ways to study.Even it would be hard for you,trust me,you all will get through that.Here are my tips for being a freshman in the university.1.Prepare lessons before class.Unlike high school,most of your lectures are hold in a large hall with hundreds of students.Professor will go through lectures without pausing and will assume you have previewed all the contents.Remember you should not be shy and should feel free to ask professors or TAs questions.You may get their schedule online or made an appointment with professor through email.2.you should keep checking your email and school website (at lease once a day),in case you may miss some important information.3.You need to attend every class and take notes carefully,it's the most effective way to your graduation.Wish you all enjoy you lifes in the university,good luck~
感觉开头略显单调,可以稍微再润色一下,后面几点写的不错,只有一些细微的语法错误.