看一下这篇演讲稿有没有语法问题,哪里还可以改得更好,语句是否通顺,请尽快!

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  • 1.tens of thousands of

    2 there are ten of thousands of foreigners come to Beijing every day.there are sb do sth?很奇怪啊

    3 must show / must do 后面自己改

    4 our the best face是不对的,our best face 或者 the best face

    5 foreign friends

    6 make Beijing green.Beijing 前没有the,后面的自己都去掉,in a green也很奇怪

    7要我命了.真多,主语是air,does harm,almost dirty 也很别扭

    8We must to do some things for aerial pollution,为了污染做事情?不要中文直译,to prevent pollution.

    9 不要用NO1.2.3,用firstly secondly,lastly