尽我所能了……我直接给你写了
such as zhongshan park nd lixiang park.
接下来语序有点问题
every morning(不要连着写,没有这个词） there are lots of old man.
Shenzhen is also famous for some sights such asEast OCT ,Splendid China Folk Village,...
There are many delicious foods in shenzhen(不能用have）,here you can taste food all over the world(没有from）
Nowadays,you also can buy your friend lots of delicious（拼写错误,上面也是）food(buy sb.sth)
最后一段读不通,感觉每对
The history of shenzhen will help you to understand the city better.
祝你英语水平步步高!把机会留给我哦~