“Whether should encourage students to join in sports at school is an issue that arouses controversy.” 语法不规范,请确认
“Some people think sports is full of competition, while others against that sports can cultivate students' co-operation.”此句型用的太过频繁,建议改为sb. suppose +从句或sb. claim +从句或sb. agree +从句或第一人称时替换为As far as I am concerned.
“Therefore, some of parents don not encourage their children to pay a attention to sports and even restrict their ambitiousness of sports.”把 some of parents 改成 some of the parents
“To summary, I suggest that parents and teachers should encourage students involve in different sports with their classmates.” 语法不规范
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