h（He） didn't call me tonight.i am（was,因为你这里是在知道他没打电话之前的感受,所以用was） so glad.i have been（不用have been,就用was行了） afraid that h（he） will call me,and i don't（同理,didn't） know how to face h（him）.last night i made a right decision.from this case,i know（knew） that every time we face a problem ,we should never bury your head in sand.we should face it bravely,because,in any case,you have to solve the problem,if you can（can可以不用,这样更通畅） hide yourself today,maybe you have to face it tomorrow,and you will feel depressed the whole day.so why don't（加上一个you） solve it right now.
主要就是时态有点小问题
第二个建议he和him不要缩写成h,要不然会弄错
主题明确,很好