the village was always very （quiet）安静的,宁静的；这里只能用形容词.
the people living there were busy about working in their fields during the day and went to bed early at night（tiring删掉,这里意思完整了,不需要tiring） after a long day's hard work.白天,人们在各自的田地里耕种,结束了一整天的忙碌他们都早早地回去睡觉.
all of them had lived in a village for all their life and had（ never删掉） left for less than one day at a time.他们中很多人大半生都住在这个村庄,每次出城也都不超过一天.
on （those那些,这里实际上可改可不改,看题目要求）days how they left （for）出发,they got up early in morning.they filled with their cart of fruit,vegetables and sheeps,and went to the market in the town beyond their valley.
在那些天他们如何出发,早上他们早早起来,把车子装满水果,蔬菜和羊,然后去村子外的集市.
they（ came时态用过去时） back in the evening with some money and perhaps a present for their children that was their life．傍晚他们带着钱或给孩子的礼物回来.这就是他们的生活.