My Dream Home
(My dream home is in the country.) The air there is clean and fresh. It is quiet. My house is very beautiful. It has at least three floors. There is a big garden in front of my house and a river behind it. I like working in the garden and fishing in the river. I often invite my friends to chat and play games at my home. I think it is nice to live there. (68words)
这是一篇给材料作文，要求写一篇描述自己理想中的家园的作文。材料给的比较全面，动笔前一定要认真阅读材料，组织语言，确定要用到的句式，时态等问题。写作中注意语句通顺，意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能遗漏要求中的要点，开头适当展开想象，适当发挥。文中注意一些常见句式，固定短语的应用。写好后多读几遍，适当修改。