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In childhood,all occupations in our eyes were scientist,teacher,doctor and police person.When elementary school teacher let us talk about what we wanted to do when we grew up,everybody proudly mentioned one of these occupations.At that time,I said I wanted to become an outstanding policewoman.
When I grow up,my dispositions changed,and I no longer dreamed to become a police woman,even thought it still is a sacred occupation to me.Since graduation from high school,My ideal have completely focused on the media aspect.