请帮我检查我写得这篇英文短文,感觉有很多文法上的错误.

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  • For me,the quality I value most of a friend is that she has a lot in common with me.好像这样更好吧:the quality of a friend,which I value most,is that she ……

    interest做兴趣讲是不可数名词,应该去s,like最好换成such as,We will……不应该单独成一句,前面的if从句没主句,而且不应该是we,前面是if you后面we矛盾.

    应该用different修饰views

    I think we quarrel,应该加入情态动词使之与if对称,而且reconcile是及物动词,后面不能光秃秃.

    If I have such friends by my side:If 有这样的朋友在身边