thanks for taking time out of your busy days to（最好改成and） read my letter.I'm sorry to trouble（这个词用得不是特别恰当） you.My name is wanglin.（大写）I'm from China,I am seventeen years old,high schoo（有语病,不是并列关系）l in China,i am Art Students.（你是很多学生?）so I give you a piece（如果不是实际送的话最好不要这么写） of my paintings,I may not have drawn it accurately enough.（有点别扭）i hope you like it.my French is not good,you know,We don't learn French,so I try my best to use English to give you a letter,（give别扭） to express my sincere feelings,you can see the letter is my pleasure.First of all,I wish you a happy new year,Give you a piece of my own paintings to express my mind.
since I watched movies you starring,（没看懂） I've fell（p.p.是fallen） in love with you and your movies,elegant temperament touched my heart,thank you for leaving good memories.
初中党,水平有限……