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In this study,the college students are taken as the objects of the research,investigated what kind of vocabulary to learn strategies is used most frequently among the college students,aimed at finding out the problems in university students' vocabulary learning strategies.The questionnaire survey method and the documentary research method are used to find out what strategies do the university students use in their daily life,and to discus how to learn vocabulary effectively and to help more students to improve language practical application abilities.The data is analyzed by using the tool:SPSS 19 and the study has investigated 60 college students in East China University of Science and Technology and Shanghai Normal University.Studying several relates theories,just makes an attempt to point out the weaknesses of Chinese students in universities.