My composition,Who can help me correct the mistake?

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  • My name is LiuXing who is a new Grade one student in XinHua High School.Today is my first day in the new school,(因为先前已经说了学校名,所以这里就不用重复了)i am glad to study in this high school and i feel excited.I find that the teachers are enthusiastic and people around me are friendly.(这里就用周围人来代表)There are more subjects in High School as compare to Secondary School,(在高中里的科目和中学比起来多了很多)such as Biology,Physics,English and so on.Basketball,Drama Club and Computer Club(club指社团)are the most popular co-curricular activities(我学校就用这个,co就是指附带的.不过我想和那个extra...的差不多).

    要相信我哦~保证对!