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这道英语改错怎么写?共有九错误一正确,我用 ﹠表示句末：Dear Sir,I'm a senior three stud

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Dear Sir,I'm a senior three student.I often do bad【badly】 in my&exams,so I have been trying to catch up 【with】the others.&But I'm（ such）【so】 concerned about my marks that sometimes&I cannot eat or sleep well at 【a去掉】 night .I'm afraid that&i（我不大写了,忽略大写）may get low marks in the test again as【改成even】 if i work&hard 【harder】than before.i have no courage to face low marks.&i cannot fix my mind on my study,whenever i think of&this.it is obvious that the worry 【加个has 】had a bad effect on&my school works.i'm feeling 【I feel】very sad.would you&pkease telling【tell】 me how i should deal with my worry?