Parents have gained some life experiences and they know what

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  • Parents have gained some life experiences and(and最好改成so,并在前面加逗号) they know what to act(act改成do,或what改成how) in different situations.

    However,it is important to listen(加to) those who love us and want to give us an(把an去掉) advice when we have serious problems in our lives(lives改成life).

    That'swhy we should ask them for help first when they (they改成we) have problems.Therefore(改成However),there are moments when we avoid them and don't want to follow them.With time passed(加上by),my brother as well as i have realized that our parents are right.Please turn for(for改成to) your parents when(这里加上you are) in trouble,for they(加are)worth trusting and ready to offer help all the time.