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This summer vacation,I went to Beijing.
It was a very great city!
We went to the Great Wall first.Like its name,it was very great.We can see many mountians around.
Then we went to visit Tian'an Men Square.It was also fantastic.
We lived in a small house in a Beijing Hutung,it was a traditional Beijing building called 'four-section compound'.
I enjoyed myself a lot.
I love Beijing!