不对,要改一下（In recent years,for a growing number of graduates to receive plastic surgery and it has become a hot topic.）近年来,越来越多的毕业生接受整形外科手术,它已成为一个热门话题
错在了我对于句子错误的理解,但是你说的对,将receive改成receiving就会变得比较顺,我认为我们的两个句子都是用正确的语法来表达意思.这句 In recent years,for a growing number of graduates,to receive plastic surgery has become a hot topic,你仔细读一下,是不是存在语法问题,因为如果将这句话翻译过来就变成“今年几年来,越来越过毕业生,整形外科手术已成为一个热门话题.这句话是不是不对,完全就是两句话的意思.因为没有提到究竟是否是毕业生想要做整形外科手术医生,还是要做治疗.