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  • The advice of save energy ( Advices or Suggestions on energy saving )

    Now,you can see that wasting energy everywhere.It makes much( so much) pullotion(pollution) and the Earth ( is getting very ill by the minute)has been more and more illing. So there (here )are some advices that are made by myself to save energy.

    To start with, drive car ( driving a car )can make(produce so ) much CO2 that makes the Earth becomes hotter and hotter. Thus I think you can walk or ride bikes instead driving a car.

    Then power,water and paper are also (valuable ) be energy(energies). So you should save it by saving power, save every drop by closing water tap and wasting less papers.

    At last , some rubbish can be recycled to be used again a second time , might be a third time too ! this is also a good advice that I think.