to take 改为 taking 因为enjoy doing sth
progresses 改为 progress 因为 progress不可数
works改为work 因为make sb do sth
l do hope you not to miss it改为i do hope that you will not miss it.因为hope 不存在加sb to do的结构
like 改为as 因为 look on sb as 把某人当作
entered into 改为entered 因为这是及物动词,不要加介词into
forgot 改为 left 遗留,forget 是忘记某事的意思
for改为of 固定结构 it is +形容词+of sb
less改为fewer 因为fewer加可数名词
two bread 改为two pieces of pape