mistletoe6918,
有的错误不是语法错误,是句子意思的问题.第一句偶查了下原句
1.Because the universal ideals of liberty and democracy are core American principles,it is hard for U.S.leaders to acknowledge that othersocieties 【cannot be readily remade】 in America’s image.
2.The expansion of university education has been accompanied by a decline in social mobility,and 【删去 主语不符】 these massive enrolments have been overwhelmingly middle-class.
3.In addition to advocate bad ideas even after they have been found【 wanted】,many of these institutions also make it harder to hold public officials accountable for majorpolicy blunders.
4.In public deals,lawyers often assume alarge and continuing role once the investment banker and buyer and seller 【have been struck by】 economic deal.
5.While prompted by numerous trade restrictions,the non-importation movement was ultimately about political rights,with the colonies 【using】 their economic leverage to defend their rights.
6.Paine,drawing upon the lessons learned from the non-important movement,concluding that the denial of American goods to Britain was 【a sufficient economic leverage】 to achieve independence.
7.Nearly all the buldings in the Forbidden City face south,the direction of holiness,giving protection【from】 icy winds and also permitting subtle decoration based on catching infinite variations of sunlight.
8.Los Angeles gets about twice as much rain as Phoenix does and Seattle gets about 【four times as much as Phoenix's】rain.Still,Pheonix gets more rain than Las Vegas,which averages only about 4.5 inches per year.
9.【As far back as】in 1985 Japan was aware of its vulnerability inrelying primarly on research generated in other countries and technology borrowed from Europe and America.(这个是as far as指长度距离.只是用法上说不通）
yours,kyon