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  • Dear Mr.Walters,

    I am sorry that I haven't written a word to you for so long.The fact is my senior school year gets me really tired every day.I have to stay up late to finish my homework every night.Now I am on my summer holiday and I am happy to be able to do things I like.

    I enjoy watching movies very much.And I have watched many old movies these days.I found I was deeply moved by the grace and beauty of Audrey Hepburn.I love all her movies,especially Roman Holiday,Funny Face and My Fair Lady.When I knew she was appointed a goodwill ambassador to the United Nations Children's Fund,I did feel her kindness and her love to the kids in the poor countries was so great.

    What do you think of Audrey Hepburn?Who is your favorite actor/actress?I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

    Yours

    Richard