My birthday is in June 21,that was,yesterday
Yesterday I was very happy,my friends came to my birthday party
They helped me to decorate a room,very beautiful,I liked it very much.
On a small table,was they sent birthday gift,I loved to eat chocolate,and I loved the little bear doll for a long time.
Little bear doll was pink,its ears had a bowknot,was I liked blue.
In addition,mom and dad gave me a cake was very delicious,was a large fruit cake.I and my friends were very like.
We also played games together,mom funny appearance made you more happy.
Yesterday,I was really very happy,and my friends.
Could I thank them very much and my birthday together.
Dear Ann gave me a very nice cream cakes.
Worse,I didn't like cream cakes
这是练习还是自己写的?语意不连贯,我只照着你的要求做了,别的没动