an blink
14 years old,or an unknown world,also must be full of ups and downs.
look forward of
adventure of the new year 这句最要命,错误很明显,两处.
建议你自己修改,能改掉自己的错误,才会真正进步.另:你这两个文章读起来很"中文",有很多虽然不是语法错误,但是很别扭,不象英文,还要加强训练啊
an blink
14 years old,or an unknown world,also must be full of ups and downs.
look forward of
adventure of the new year 这句最要命,错误很明显,两处.
建议你自己修改,能改掉自己的错误,才会真正进步.另:你这两个文章读起来很"中文",有很多虽然不是语法错误,但是很别扭,不象英文,还要加强训练啊