Tom likes reading very much.He reads on the way to his school and when he is eating,he reads in bed when sleeping.Soon,he went to the hospital to check the eyesight,his eyesight was very poor.
注:这是中考的水平 语法绝对没错
躺着看书就是翻译成“read in bed” ,视力最标准的是eyesight,标准教科书上就是这样.eyesight用poor来修饰表示“视力差”.如果其他有不理解或者不满意的尽管可以说.