1.感觉演讲稿需要正式,所以认为开始的hi可以改为Hello!
2.and so on so many classic games这里有问题,and so on后面是不能再跟名词了.
3.in the industry of
4.BLIZZARD is an American
5.and was founded in 1994
6.it produced a new game(publish一般指书出版,produce可以指生产了一个软件）
7.WOW has the most gamers
8.So powerful!
9.gamers’ Blizzard(没有s了）
因为你说的是Blizzard..所以我帮你了.哈哈
我也超级支持玻璃碴的.
SC2赶紧出吧