1.Thomas joined in the army last year. (in去掉)
2.American is highly developed country. (is 后加a)
3.Driving is also great importance. (also后加of)
4.If you've past the driving test after learning,you can drive a real car. (past改成passed)
5.I like same music as you. (like后加the)
.6.They were tiring after a long day's hard work. (tiring 改成tired)
7.Written English is more and less the same in both Britain and America. (and改为or)
8.One student in three wear glasses. (wear改成wears)
9.I spent a great many money on English books last year. (many改成deal of)