建议:1,to apply for the position with a copy of my CV attached.
2,I am a senior student majoring...
3,这个必须改:will graduate.去掉be
4,have...这个句子没有主语,fragment了
建议:1,to apply for the position with a copy of my CV attached.
2,I am a senior student majoring...
3,这个必须改:will graduate.去掉be
4,have...这个句子没有主语,fragment了