In this week,I did a lot of things.
On Monday,I went to the club to play the chess with my classmates.
改：On Monday,I went to the club to play chess with my classmates.（把the去掉,在运动和棋类都不用加the,不过乐器要加the）
On Tuesday,I read books at home and play the piano for one hour.
改：On Tuesday,I read books at home and played the piano for one hour.（应该用played 过去式）
On Wednesday,I went the Book City to buy some books.
改：On Wednesday,I went to the Book City to buy some books.（went 后面要加to,不能直接加地点）
Suddenly,there was a typhoon,I have to stay at the gate.
改：Suddenly,there was a typhoon,I had to stay at the gate.（用had 过去式）
I waited for the rain to stop.After two hour,I came back home.
改：I waited for the rain to stop.After two hours,I came back home.（two hours 用复数）
It were terrible in my house.
改：It was terrible in my house!（这里不能用were 要用was）
On Saturday,It was fine.I took a trip at my parents.
改：On Saturday,It was fine.I took a trip with my parents.（吧at改为with）
What a terrible trip is it!
改：What a terrible trip it was!（把is改为was it提前）
呼~~终于敲完了.