i wish i wish
nothing can defeat me
nothing's gonna change my love for you
这里没有主语,改成I don't wanna let you go
这里语意连接不当,改成However,leave me .
leave me alone
if you don't like me
mercy can be hurting sometimes
i thought i was hurt
but it seems like i was faking
lately i have been thinking
ain't 改成won't i know that it won't working
want to 改成 wanna ,that去掉更好 but i just wanna know how are you doing
how are you doing
how is everything going
can be改成am even if i am so rude sometimes
i don't understand what you said
i've been trying to figure it out
it isn't改成was not i hope that was not my wishful thinking
do not kid me
非常认真的改完了呀楼主!