因为我想把英语作文练好但是写了又不知道哪些地方语法不对所以希望找人帮忙看看.不知道这样练习能否提高

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  • How Should

    Parents Help (Their) Children

    to Be Independent

    Recently,quite a lot parents prefer to do all of the things(everything) for their children .But is this

    good for their children to grow up or making(make) their children have the ability(ies) to

    face the world alone?The answer ,definitely ,is no.The only way to make their

    children have a better life in this world in the future is to help them become

    independent.

    So,how should parents help their children to be independent

    In

    my opinion ,parents should give their children their own space(s) ,give their

    chance(s) to make their own decision(s).Maybe their decision(s) (are)not quite right,but

    this can help them learn from their mistake(s) .Gradually,I think their(they) will

    develop their own way(s) to face the world..By doing this,can parents help

    children to be independent.